Ketchup, by Jaed (PG)
Jul. 3rd, 2006 04:21 pmRec Category: Humor
Pairing: none
Category: humor, gen, Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill, team
Warning: gratuitous ketchup stains
Author on LJ: unknown
Author's Website: unknown
Link: Ketchup
Why This Must Be Read: Armed only with a tomato ketchup bottle, Daniel must save SG-1!
This fic is one of those rarities: an over-the-top humor piece that actually works. Told in one of the most engaging and authentic Jack voices (with the OTT bit included) I've ever read, this hilarious little story tells the gripping tale of a booby-trapped pyramid and Daniel's noble attempts to release the others from their lethal prison, armed only with - yep, a bottle of ketchup.
While it's clear from the very first paragraphs that this fic is not meant to be taken seriously, it takes itself seriously, which is why it works so well. Too many parodies are ruined by a self-conscious awareness that this is humor, so why should the author bother to make the characters true to themselves? In Ketchup, however, Jaed neatly avoids this pitfall. Yes, the characterizations are exaggerated, but they're still characterizations. Jack does have a tendency to mother-hen, and Teal'c does tend towards deadpan humor in which he deliberately misconstrues Jack's colloquialisms, and Sam does play with technology that might get her into trouble as well as diplomatically try to find a way to tell her colonel that he's crazy, and Daniel does... well, just about everything in this fic. Except get hurt. Which makes this parody practically unique. :)